the1manwiththeplan's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Just a Snake.]

copied

Id give you a good score but i know exactly the youtube video you copied off
sorry bro i copied the same one and the game took me all of 2 minutes

[Lone Survivor]

new levels?

New levels would be my only complaint apart from that best flash top down shooter ive played in a month.

[Pimp My Porche]

average

The picture was cool
but there was 2 much stuff jammed into 1 screen
maybe a menu to select out of instead of it all being on 1 screen
to start with
and the soft-top roofs didnt really fit on the car that well
maybe a background track to

[Phone Home]

hey

um did you even think this game threw before submitting it
>no walking animation character just moves left and right
>level 1 cant be completed i dunno about you but level 1 being impossible counts as being a serious bug
>Coolest part of the game was probably the font of the writing which is not a good sign
> you said we had as health bar but when you jump onto the platform you just die wether the human looks at you or not
the best tip i can give you to improve it is to make it again

[Rpg Movement Tutorial 1.7]

Good job yet some explanation would be nice

A little explanation of the actionscript would be nice
I mean were all trying to learn to do it ourselves
we cant be copying and pasting for the rest of our flash careers
and you said insert walking men as the last four frames with no explanation of how
to make them walk

[Stick Ninja Rpg 1.0]

Great start

Youure characters were all different variations of the rpg tutorial you did
The background is very cool in my opinion the lifebars were smooth
a bit concerned about the novice attack animations being a bolt of lightning I mean hes a novice and he can shoot lightning out of his hands ?wtf
Overall 7/10 cant wait to see the finished product